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| Subject: Booked #1 - The Undertakers Attacker Thu Jun 17, 2010 2:24 pm | |
| I'm going to start writing my own style of booking to a particular segment and how I'd like to see it go, you can all add your thoughts and opinions, good or bad to it and even add your own ideas on how you'd like to see it played out, I'll start with The Undertaker and his 'Vegetative State'
Kane continues to be as destructive as ever on SmackDown! in his quest to find who attacked his 'brother' and is in big feuds with The Big Show and CM Punk, he would face CM Punk at "MitB" PPV as Kane believes it was Punk and the SES, after going through Luke Gallows and chasing off the masked man a message comes on the Titan Tron that reads "I'm coming back and I'm finally free, I KNOW WHO DONE IT" and as Kane looks at the Tron CM Punk rolls him up for a 3 count.
On SmackDown! Kane is even more convinced that CM Punk has something to do with the attack and the masked man is pivitol to finding out answers, CM Punk continues to deny his involvement with the attack but warns Kane that if he continues to press he will pay the price at the hands of the Straight Edge Society, leading up to SummerSlam CM Punk finds himself in the World Title picture once again, this time in a Triple Threat with Jack Swagger and Christan, Punk nails Christian with the GTS before all the lights go out, the gong rings through the arena, the lights come back on again with Kane standing behind CM Punk, Punk turns around right into a Tombstone and once again, Jack Swagger nails Kane and gets the quick undeserving pin on Christian.
CM Punk continues to deny his involvement with the attack but warns Kane that his brothers 'vegetated state' will seem like a walk in the sand compared to how he will end up, Kane although still weary of Punk begins to turn his attention to Jack Swagger, Kane realises that out of all of this, Swagger is the guy who has got most out of all of this, he has had Kane basically win matches for him and he has also not had to face The Undertaker for the World Title, Kane realises that Swagger could be the attacker.
Kane enters into a feud with Swagger and Kane himself finds himself on the wrong end of strange goings on, this only makes Kane's suspicions over Swagger stronger, Swagger continues to deny.
At Night Of Champions its Swagger vs Kane for the WHC and Kane is setting Swagger up for the Chokeslam when the lights go out again and a gong rings around the arena, on the Tron again the message is simple "All is not what it seems" and then a quick 20 second recap of Kane & The Undertaker's history appears and the video ends with Kane's mask on the screen "All is not what it seems" Swagger manages to hit a distressed Kane with the Gut-wrench for the win.
Kane opens up SmackDown! with the mask in his hand, he looks at the mask and screams "WHY, WHY ARE YOU STILL HAUNTING ME" and looks extremely confused, he goes on "JUST WHEN I FEEL NORMAL YOU ALWAYS RETURN, YOU DID THIS NOT ME"
Kane then has a match with a jobber when Kane absolutely destroys him, he puts the mask on the jobber and then hits him with a big chokeslam and then a Tombstone, he then takes the mask off the jobber and carries him to he back, he does this for the next couple of weeks.
The Undertaker returns to SmackDown! and calls Kane out, Kane is still distressed yet somewhat remorseful, he tells Taker that while he has investigated every avenue, it has taken him down the same road, the road he didn't want to go down again, Kane tells him that it wasn't The Big Show, it wasn't Jack Swagger, it wasn't Rey and it wasn't CM Punk or the Straight Edge Society, Kane looks at him dead in the eye and tells him "IT WAS ME, IT WAS ME WHO ATTACKED YOU"......The Undertaker looks at him and tells him that if it was him then he will be going straight to hell in the form of the next PPV "Hell in a Cell"
At "HiaC" The Undertaker & Kane are inside the Cell going at it, Kane has the chance to end The Undertaker but doesn't take it, something stops him, he can't finish him off, The Undertaker who looks punch drunk at this point looks at him, willing him on to give him his best shot and Kane simply doesn't, Kane falls to his knees and screams "I CAN'T, THATS NOT WHO I AM, THATS NOT WHAT I WANT" and a confused looking Undertaker starts talking to Kane in the ring, as usual, the lights go out and a message on the TitanTron reads "Kane is not the answer, I am finally free, Kane will never be free" and with it 10 guys in masks and dressed as Arabs jump the guard rails, the Cell slowly starts rising as does the lights, these 10 guys beat up The Undertaker and handcuff him to the ropes while they absolutely destroy Kane, they bundle Kane down the isle and backstage, as a beaten up Undertaker looks on the Tron reads "Freedom is finally hear" and with it an explosion and fire engulfs each side of the stage, and from the stage out walks Muhammad Hassan and Daivari.
Hassan tells us all that he is disgusted by the American public and the WWE and he has been in Guantanamo Bay for the last five years because the imbecilic American public can't differentiate between a terrorist and a Militant and the WWE did absolutely nothing to help prove his innocence over the course of the last five years, Daivari tells us he wasn't detained but was ostracised by the same WWE and American Public in general, he claims that all his problems started thanks to The Undertaker and he decided when he got released (Without charge) that he would gain his revenge on The Undertaker which he did get, now he wants to make The Undertaker suffer by having him go through what he went through, poor treatment and being kept away from his family and friends and he tells him it might be a long long time before he ever sees his brother again.
The Undertaker vows vengeance and demands to know the whereabouts of his brother, both Hassan and Daivari both claim they have no idea where he is, apparently they claim he 'escaped' from the 10 henchman at Hell in a Cell and is in hiding simply because they fear both men, The Undertaker demands a match from Hassan and although Hassan backs off, Teddy Long comes out and makes the match for the Survivor Series in a #1 contenders match for Jack Swaggers World Title, after a hard hitting and emotional match, The Undertaker has Hassan up in position for a Tombstone when the Titan Tron plays and shows a beaten up and tired looking Kane sitting tied to a chair in a dingy looking room, The Undertaker totally loses focus with Hassan as he tries to hear what Kane says, Hassan hits Taker with the reverse STO for the win, Kane gets back to his feet pretty quickly though and Hassan and Daivari head to the back.
The following week Daivari claims he still doesn't know where Kane was although he did offer to help The Undertaker find him, he told The Undertaker "You scratch our back and I'll scratch yours" The Undertaker tells him to stop talking in riddles and demands to know what the deal he has to make is to get Kane back, Daivari tells The Undertaker he needs to wait for instruction from Muhammed Hussan, the main man!
Hussan later tells The Undertaker his task is a simple one, he was on the verge of greatness before The Undertaker, the WWE and the American Public all got him "Basically kidnapped" so he wants his five years back and while he knows The Undertaker can't grant him back his time, he can grant him back his position in the WWE, Hassan tells The Undertaker that he was on an unstoppable road to the top and he wants that position back, he wants The Undertaker to help him win the World Heavyweight Championship and he is sure that success will see them 'find' Kane, The Undertaker strongly refuses to help anyone as heinous as Hassan win the World Title, Jack Swagger comes out and tells them no one will be screwing him out of the World Title, he has held on to it for near on 8 months and he plans on keeping it for even longer.
At TLC in Tables match for the WHC. Hassan vs Swagger with the match reaching the 20 minute stage and both of them seemingly spent, Swagger sets the Table up, Hassan is on the top rope but Swagger jumps to the top rope, both of them are struggling on the top rope when The Undertaker busts through the ring canvas, Swagger unaware of this still on the top rope, Taker moves behind Swagger and hits him with the the Last Ride through the table, The Undertaker has just helped Muhammed Hassan to become the World Heavyweight Champion, The Undertaker looks disgusted with himself but the fans know he has done it for the right reasons and he has done it to get his brother back.
On SmackDown! after TLC the show would open with 10 guys dressed as Arabs having a guard of honour on the SD! ramp as Daivari walks to the ring and announces the new Champion of the World to the audiance, Muhammad Hassan tells the World he has finally realised his destiny, this was what was supposed to happen five years ago, this was a birthright of his that the WWE and the American Public tried to deny him, this was now his time, The Undertaker cuts him off and tells him that he has kept his side of the bargain, now its up to Hassan to make good on his promise.
Hassan agrees and thanks The Undertaker for his co-operation, he tells The Undertaker he will deliver Kane to him personally next week on SmackDown!, on New Years Day!
The next week, Hassan and Divari open up the show, they then instruct the 10 guys to bring 'the merchandise' to the ring and with it they come out and have a hooded figure in an orange boiler suit with them, Hassan tells The Undertaker that while he is a very dangerous man, he is also a man of his word, when he promises something, he always delivers and with it he tugs the hood down and reveals a very demoralised Kane standing in the ring, the lights automatically go out and the gong tolls and when the lights go on again The Undertaker is standing in the ring, he lands a punch on Divari and Hassan escapes unscathed, The Undertaker immediately turns his attention to Kane, they stare at each other for a few moments before Kane lifts his hands and brings them down with the thundering pyro on the ring posts, KANE IS BACK
Hassan tells The Undertaker its the most useful the unappreciated brother has been in years and tells him he will pay for punching Divari, The Undertaker tells him he wants both of them in the tonight, Teddy Long comes out and tells them he can have both of them in the Main Event , in a tag match, Hassan & Divari vs The Brothers of Destruction, later on in the Tag Match The Undertaker has actively tried to do it all on his own as he doesn't want Kane in a physical battle after everything he has been through, near the end of the match both Hassan and Divari are double teaming The Undertaker, Kane finally gets in the ring and knocks Divari out of the ring, he helps The Undertaker land a double big boot to Hassan, The Undertaker signals the 'throat cut' sign and is going for the Tombstone, as he does that he turns around right into a big Chokeslam from Kane, Kane picks up The Undertaker and nails him with a Tombstone, as he does that he starts laughing hysterically and Hussan gets in the ring and puts the Camel Clutch onto The Undertaker as Kane gets on the mic and tells him it was a plan all along, they used The Undertaker to get the title onto Muhammed Hassan after Kane's information helped get him his release from Guantanamo Bay. | |
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| Subject: Re: Booked #1 - The Undertakers Attacker Thu Jun 17, 2010 2:55 pm | |
| took a while to read but well worth it amazing stuff! not very pg but then again thats why it was amazing!
I think when the undertaker retuerns if he was badass undertaker or more like badass then hed be able to promo better .And it was nice for the people to take out undertaker to be someone unexpected not nxt or one of the fatal 4 way .great stuff | |
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| Subject: Re: Booked #1 - The Undertakers Attacker Thu Jun 17, 2010 3:04 pm | |
| I think it's a good idea, not sure if Hassan is still wrestling anymore, and I would expect the attacker being Hassan would be an anticlimatic one for a lot of people who won't have much idea who he is. | |
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| Subject: Re: Booked #1 - The Undertakers Attacker Thu Jun 17, 2010 3:19 pm | |
| I wasnt around druing there wwe stay but i know that theyv recieved heavy praise from us so called smarks.
EDIT: was any of them tiger ali singh? | |
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| Subject: Re: Booked #1 - The Undertakers Attacker Thu Jun 17, 2010 5:30 pm | |
| They were popular in 2005 with smarks and the IWC, when I say anticlimatic I mean the crowd at the event, which is made up of mainly kids and marks most times wouldn't really get it, and the angle could fall flat.
In an ideal world, everyone would understand what was going on and who they were, but the average WWE fan seems to have the memory of a goldfish, they seem to struggle to remember earlier this year never mind 2005. | |
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| Subject: Re: Booked #1 - The Undertakers Attacker Thu Jun 17, 2010 5:35 pm | |
| iv heard IWC a lot recentley who are they and why do people care what they think | |
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| Subject: Re: Booked #1 - The Undertakers Attacker Thu Jun 17, 2010 5:40 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Booked #1 - The Undertakers Attacker Thu Jun 17, 2010 5:42 pm | |
| should of got that i was thinking independent wrestling commite well thats embarasing | |
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| Subject: Re: Booked #1 - The Undertakers Attacker Thu Jun 17, 2010 6:31 pm | |
| Sounds OK, TBH, I'm not as big of a fan of this vegative Taker storyline as I was before the NXT RAW invasion, as I think it will turn out to be them who were the attackers and I want the two stories kept seperate.
Going back to your booking, I'm wondering why Kane would help Hassan win the title, is it to get back at Taker for something? Also, instead of being kidnapped, I think it would be better if (and this may sound silly) perhaps Kane had a tag attached to his arm, leg or neck that could be ignited if he tries to escape from the watch of Hassan, Davari and co (Kane would follow around the Arabs and do their dirty work, ignoring Taker). The tag could remind Kane of the pain he suffered when he was trapped in the house fire as a child and he lives in fear of suffering the same type of pain.
Also not sure whether I would want Kane to turn on Taker at all, WWE could get Kane out of the picture by moving him to RAW and allow Taker and possibly another member of the SD roster (Christian maybe) to take on Hassan's crew. | |
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| Subject: Re: Booked #1 - The Undertakers Attacker Thu Jun 17, 2010 8:03 pm | |
| WOW itz my first asrticle reading and if everthingis like thiz i am goingto enjoy this forum | |
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| Subject: Re: Booked #1 - The Undertakers Attacker Thu Jun 17, 2010 9:26 pm | |
| Good stuff Gaffer. I have a best man's speak to prepare. Ca you help Na, seriously, great stuff. | |
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| Subject: Re: Booked #1 - The Undertakers Attacker Thu Jun 17, 2010 11:49 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Booked #1 - The Undertakers Attacker Fri Jun 18, 2010 12:11 am | |
| - Mackem wrote:
- Good stuff Gaffer. I have a best man's speak to prepare. Ca you help Na, seriously, great stuff.
Mate I was supposed to be a stand in Best Man last year but my other mate managed to make it, I've got stuff in a shoebox somewhere with a lot of material and sort focal points that are quite good, I'll have a look for you tomorrow bud | |
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| Subject: Re: Booked #1 - The Undertakers Attacker Fri Jun 18, 2010 12:13 am | |
| Glad some of you liked it, if any of you have the time or can be bothered wouldn't mind seeing what you'd like to see come of this 'attack' angle | |
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| Subject: Re: Booked #1 - The Undertakers Attacker Fri Jun 18, 2010 12:20 am | |
| - Rocky wrote:
- Sounds OK, TBH, I'm not as big of a fan of this vegative Taker storyline as I was before the NXT RAW invasion, as I think it will turn out to be them who were the attackers and I want the two stories kept seperate.
Going back to your booking, I'm wondering why Kane would help Hassan win the title, is it to get back at Taker for something? Also, instead of being kidnapped, I think it would be better if (and this may sound silly) perhaps Kane had a tag attached to his arm, leg or neck that could be ignited if he tries to escape from the watch of Hassan, Davari and co (Kane would follow around the Arabs and do their dirty work, ignoring Taker). The tag could remind Kane of the pain he suffered when he was trapped in the house fire as a child and he lives in fear of suffering the same type of pain.
Also not sure whether I would want Kane to turn on Taker at all, WWE could get Kane out of the picture by moving him to RAW and allow Taker and possibly another member of the SD roster (Christian maybe) to take on Hassan's crew. Why would Kane help Hassan win the title? well for me the title is all about Hassan, Kane isn't helping him win the strap he is only toying with The Undertaker The Undertaker could be seen as the guy who helped got Hassan sent away, much the same as how he got Kane sent away when they where kids, so Kane realising he has done the same to Hassan, helps him out, in return, Hassan promises to help Kane get revenge on The Undertaker As for the kidnapping, it wouldn't really be a kidnapping, it would be seen like one, but when all is revealed that Kane and Hassan are in cahoots then it would be obvious that it wasn't really an abduction I like your idea about the detonator around his neck, its a bit Running Man but I like it | |
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| Subject: Re: Booked #1 - The Undertakers Attacker Fri Jun 18, 2010 7:47 am | |
| - The-Gaffer™ wrote:
- Mackem wrote:
- Good stuff Gaffer. I have a best man's speak to prepare. Ca you help Na, seriously, great stuff.
Mate I was supposed to be a stand in Best Man last year but my other mate managed to make it, I've got stuff in a shoebox somewhere with a lot of material and sort focal points that are quite good, I'll have a look for you tomorrow bud Cheers Matey. That will be good. Not till next year like but always better to be prepared. | |
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